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:iconspyed:
Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

Fella Point Right spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
Ninja Point Right I know. That's why it's going to work.

Do not try and bend the spoon ...

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The Angry Deviant

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:iconspukee:
wow sorry it took so long to reply to your comment - I'm glad you liked the piece and I think you're right about the ending. I didn't really notice the positives and negatives until you pointed them out - a different perspective is always a great way to work out the kinks in any artform and I rather appreciate yours.
:iconlady-blue:
good comment! I didn't know how much that new rhyme scheme would affect the reading. I usually don't do it like that. Time for revision! Thanks!

Heart Amy

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:heart:Amy

*ArtisanCraft :bulletblue: *Crafty-Goodness

Etsy: [link]
:iconkenzie:
dude- amelie kicks ass... isnt brand new an emo band? i've only heard one of their songs, and they seemed cool. i really really loved your latest poem- it was genius!

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We're going to right the world and live our lives the way lives were meant to be lived. With the throat and the wrists. And love till it hurts maybe, but goddamn girl. Live.

-Sandra Cisneros
:iconlady-blue:
I am really enjoying your collection here... I'm getting too sleepy to read stuff, so I'm going to bed, but I'll be back... :) (Smile) I'm going to add you to my devwatch...

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:heart:Amy

*ArtisanCraft :bulletblue: *Crafty-Goodness

Etsy: [link]
:iconlady-blue:
Thank you sooo much for your kind comment... When I get a chance I'll look at your poems too...
Lady Blue

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:heart:Amy

*ArtisanCraft :bulletblue: *Crafty-Goodness

Etsy: [link]
:iconspukee:
:) (Smile)

thank's a lot for the favorite I really appreciate it - I'm sure you know what it means when you know something you wrote actually means something to someone else. I don't write for others, but it's nice when poetry reaches out beyond yourself.
:icon-tank:
thanks sooo much for the comments and fav...Hug
-tank

-=don't fear to imagine=-

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'To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important, sacred or valuable. To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility.'
-Kurt Kobain
:iconravenlynn:
thanks for the comments and for the favorites
it was so sweet!


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raVen lYnn
:iconryot:
thanksya fer the comment very much... nice to know people read and actually may enjoy these

just getting into this whole deviant thing, so it was nice to talk to ya

-ryot

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